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Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 17/12/07 12:09 PM · On: Flat on the Floor

Great song - I'm a Zeppelin and Staind girl myself but Nickelback works for me too...and works for this chapter...

Author's Response: The classics are definately the best... Supernatural has the best soundtrack ever and I love it. Though I'm a real sucker for newer rock too.

Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 09/11/07 05:27 PM · On: Flat on the Floor

WOW, this was an awesome chapter! This whole fic has been intriguing, compelling, but the STYLE of ch one is wicked. The way you interspersed those unbelievably appropriate lyrics, both boys’ intense thoughts and THEN the surprise of the YED’s observations – outstanding! All interwoven to create a complete picture in my head. Loved the cute one liners, the digs about “does my bum look big?” and “that’s not how compliments work” for a bit of Winchester fun. This description was vivid in portraying evil, malicious intent – “Tension was slowly building between the two, hiding behind false smiles; they were keeping things from each other. They were scared. He smiled at the thought. If they were scared that meant they were vulnerable too. He cocked his head to the side as he watched the youngest open the door for the eldest, his yellow eyes glistening in the distance but unseen by the two hunters.” – not to mention just downright kicka$$ writing. Add in YED’s analysis of the dark places in Dean’s mind, his conclusion that two Winchesters are better than one, and THAT lyric as a last word and you’ve got a stunning piece of work!

Author's Response:
Thanks! I thought I'd try something different... I always like doing that, and this time I decided, hmmm. lyrics! So I'm glad you liked them and you thought it worked. I love Nickelback and that's definately one of my favourite songs.
I love adding the YED's point of view... he's so evil its fun!!! >:D I miss him... kinda...

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 22/09/07 08:15 PM · On: Flat on the Floor

Pyromaniac is definitely more Dean's speed.
Every chapter adds a few more pieces of the puzzle, but it seems that with every piece you add I find the puzzle just gets larger. There are more questions than answers. Hope to figure it all out.

Author's Response:
Dean's started so many fires that he really could be seen as a pyromaniac, lol - and in the episode bugs... the can of bug spray as a mini flametorch - priceless.
And I'm also really bad for that, bringing more question out instead of the really need to know answers - :) but glad you're still reading!

Reviewer: reece6521 (Signed) · Date: 09/09/07 02:28 PM · On: Flat on the Floor

Freaks have never looked so hot.(if you'll excuse the pun) Come on you 2, talk to each other! Love it,more please.

Author's Response:
Lol - I know what you mean... gorgeous... :)
Working on more today, :D

Reviewer: supernaturalpass (Signed) · Date: 03/09/07 03:07 PM · On: Flat on the Floor

Another great chapter! I really love this story!!

Author's Response: Thank you! Glad to have you reading!

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 02/09/07 10:02 PM · On: Flat on the Floor

Yay, thanks for the update. The song fit perfectly with everything you were writing! Nicely done Rae666
~Kayla

Author's Response: Thank you! Really glad that the song worked, so thanks! :D

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 02/09/07 06:30 PM · On: Flat on the Floor

“That’s not how compliments work Sammy… you’re supposed to just say something nice – not add something bad to it.” Heehee
Another great chapter Rae, loved the little flashback, and the idea that Dean may not be too worried if he is a freak - because Sam is too, so that makes it okay. Oh, boys *sigh*

Author's Response:
:D Thanks - glad you liked that line, he he.
Yeah, if they're freaks, at least they're freaks together, lol. Bless them and their brotherliness...

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 02/09/07 03:32 PM · On: Flat on the Floor

Oooooh, love the the bit with the demon!!!! Veeery creepy and well-written. Yes, Nickelback is freakin' awesome...love 'em too...woo-hoo! 'Nother awesome chapter! Okay, okay, I'm gonna go with more bribery to ellicit another chapter...cookies?? M&Ms?? Your very own Winchester rifle??

Author's Response:
Lol! Thanks! I love creepy, so glad you thought it was. And Nickelback - WOO!!
Thanks loads... he he, and as for the bribery, can I have all three? :D

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 02/09/07 01:11 PM · On: Flat on the Floor

Even if Dean and Sam're running from the demon, he'll find them. Terrific story, can't wait to know what'll be the demon next move.

Author's Response: That's true - that's definately true. Thank you! Hope I can provide some action or answers in the next chapter :D

Reviewer: Scanilla (Signed) · Date: 02/09/07 11:10 AM · On: Flat on the Floor

Handsome freaks :) I liked the way you included those lyrics - that was nice and different. I'm little bit worried about the demon...
I added you my favourite.

Author's Response:
Totally agree - handsome freaks... :D
I was in a weird mood with the lyrics and kinda thought they were appropriate so I'm glad it worked :D
And the demon... yeah, he is worrying...
So thank you! - For reading, reviewing and adding me as a favourite :D Thank you so much!!!!

Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 01/09/07 09:45 PM · On: Flat on the Floor

you're killing me here. are we ever gonna find out what exactly the deal is with dean and fire?

Author's Response: Yes you are - but I'm afraid to tell you all in case your disappointed, lol. If I can get the story on the right track then either next chapter or the chapter after that I'll reveal part of it. Thanks for reading!!!

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 01/09/07 09:00 PM · On: Flat on the Floor

yeah, but such gorgeous freaks...!!!! Thanks, rae...this story continues to keep me hooked

Author's Response: Gotta agree...they are so freaking gorgeous (no pun intended - just don't wanna use my usual swear words) Thanks loads for still reading :D

Reviewer: Phoenix_Song778 (Signed) · Date: 01/09/07 07:29 PM · On: Flat on the Floor

Great update! Makes me very uneasy that old yellow eyes is skulking around watching the boys. Now that he knows about Dean's abilities I can only imagine what he's got in store for not only Sam but his brother as well!

Author's Response: Thank you! Glad it makes you uneasy :D That's what I was aiming for, he he.

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 01/09/07 06:53 PM · On: Flat on the Floor

Nice update. I laughed at the part about Dean asking if his butt looked big. How funny!

Author's Response: Thanks! lol - I figured that's the type of thing a self conscious but vain Dean would ask... he he.

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