This ch as a delve into the boys relationship was excellent: how they read and interpret each other, how it kills them to hurt or worry the other. Yep, know each other well all right – “Trick questions needed trick answers, or just avoiding ones” Just loved it!For me your stand out line of this ch - “Didn’t matter how fan they ran, how well they hid, the supernatural just kept coming after them. Sure, probably didn’t help that they killed every paranormal bastard that they could aim their guns at or chant a ritual at but still, surely someone out there could cut them a break?” - Sam at his reflective best, you at your writing best. Oh and the finger tapping as the trademark of that thinking – very Sam. Your analogy of fire and water was excellent, an analogy in itself to Dean’s conflict and confusion. And here we are again – ““Should be dead… should have died a long time ago.” – Dean’s tortured mind relating the situation of the moment back to the big picture guilt. Brilliant *applause*

Sam’s ponderings the end look like you’re up to something –  “It hurts him though…Or maybe it’s a good thing” …hmmm, heading for the ‘next’ button with anticicpation…

Author's Response:

Thank you :) I'm really glad you've been enjoying so far, and your reviews really mean absolute loads to me.

As for the lines you picked out - thanks! I like thoughtful, it makes a change from some of the random cahooey that's flying around my mind.

Dean and guilt... major factor that plays in this story, load the guy up with as many bags as possible and then tell him to walk for three hundred miles...

And so... thank you for taking the time to read and review!!

definitely a good thing, i think.....

Author's Response: He he - maybe...

Oooooh! This is great, Rae! I'm really looking forward to finding out what you have in store for the boys...!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you :D I feel sorry for the Winchesters... random thought just occured to me but if I had to go through every they go through in the show and in fanfictions... I'd break down, completely... Poor lads.

This is a great chapter Rae. So much happens, without anything happening - if you know what I mean! The different POVs are really well expressed, and the mystery is just intensifying. I've already put pressure on you to update the other stories - oh well, might as well make it 3 out of 3!

See you soon! 

Author's Response: I know what you mean, lol. Quick shower, mini argument and then... so yeah, not much happening but the story still moves on. lol. Thank you loads, glad you like the POVs and I'll try and update soon :D

Sam is so worried about Dean. Dean doesn't handle well that suddenly he has an ability. I loved Sam's thought about their powers. So intriguing. Great work so far Rae, I'm looking forward for more.

Author's Response: I'd say it breaks my heart to write them like that but I'm cruel and twised >:) Glad you liked Sam's thoughts... :D Thanks!

Great chapter! Keep it coming!

Author's Response: Thank you! More coming ASAP!