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Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 17/12/07 11:57 AM · On: Fall Into Sleep

Great chapter, you've really moved on the plot here...I just love the idea of Dean with this ability...

Author's Response: Thank you. I like the idea of Dean having something special. :)

Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 09/11/07 08:01 AM · On: Fall Into Sleep

So Dean’s sick, cooped up and not getting his own way! No wonder you wrote a moody, grumpy Dean. Loved this line from Sam’ - “Just let me know when you stop being all pi$$y so we can come up with our next move, besides this PMS of yours is bugging the hell out of me.” Everyone now and then Sam trumps Dean with snark one-upmanship and this line of yours was a classic!Awesome description to depict Dean’s dream - “…before the pain took full control of his senses, turning him deaf and dumb and blind…” his pain and fear is tangible. Great job!And gotta tell you, Dean playing with fire (literally!) in the middle of the night in morbid fascination was downright creepy, major eerie!!And to conclude with our beautiful Sammy ensuring that they were at peace as brothers, apologising and explaining, and Dean responding to comfort and accept, was divine.

Author's Response:

I also love how you pull out certain lines that you liked :) It encourages me to put similar things in later. He he, glad you liked them - Sam can totally trump Dean sometimes... not all the time, but sometimes.

And Dean playing with fire - I had that wrote down from an early point so it was just a matter of time before I'd managed to include it, yey!  

Thanks!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 22/09/07 07:55 PM · On: Fall Into Sleep

Wow!  Dean is going to have a hard time dealing with having abilities like the demon's special kids.  This really has me wondering.



Author's Response: The way you put it makes me feel guilty, lol - but not guilty enough to stop being cruel to him :D

Reviewer: naughtyafro (Signed) · Date: 20/08/07 05:26 AM · On: Fall Into Sleep

I've just read all of the chapters :D OMG! Awesome Story!

Poor Dean! Keep Up he Fantastic Work XD



Author's Response: Thanks for reading! Hope you keep reading :D Thanks!

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 19/08/07 07:31 PM · On: Fall Into Sleep

What the demon was doing in Dean's nightmare, not good, not good at all. Loved the concern they've for each other. Dean burned himself to see what would happen and found the experience interesting. That was a terrific chapter Rae, I'm looking forward for more. 

Author's Response: I wanna be all secretive and say something riddley and... I can't even think of the word let alone do it. Lol. So instead I'll say THANK YOU. And I had the Dean burning himself wrote out quite awhile back so I was pleased to finally find a place for it... he he. Thanks loads!

Reviewer: Scanilla (Signed) · Date: 19/08/07 08:57 AM · On: Fall Into Sleep

You wasn't entirely satisfied? Well, I was. Hopefully that helps :D

It's so sweet when boys're worried about each others. I loved the conversation in the end.

Dean playing with fire... Doesn't sound good. I'm starting to get worried too!



Author's Response:

Well I'm glad to hear you were satisfied :D

I love it when the boys worried so I'm happy you liked the conversation.

And playing with fire... guess there is something to worry about there >:) 

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 19/08/07 07:27 AM · On: Fall Into Sleep

This is a good chapter for transitioning...I REALLY liked it! I'm very interested in this great mystery surrounding Dean's power...can't wait for more!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it... I'm hoping I can get to the part that explains why he has it.

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 19/08/07 12:31 AM · On: Fall Into Sleep

You are doing such a great job with this story. Please update as soon as you can!

~Kayla



Author's Response: Thank you loads!!!

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 18/08/07 11:56 PM · On: Fall Into Sleep

nice tight little chapter...we always knew our hero was EXTRA special....... a little worried about him playing with fire though....

another quick update would be very appreciated, Rae, thanks



Author's Response: Thanks! Playing with fire, he he, curiosity killed the cat and all... :D

Reviewer: Phoenix_Song778 (Signed) · Date: 18/08/07 10:19 PM · On: Fall Into Sleep

Oooh this was good! The YED visiting Dean in his dreams...very concerning to say the least! Still trying to figure out what's going on with his newfound "ability"...I'm enjoying the mystery and waiting for more!

Author's Response: Thanks! Thought I'd better keep the YED interested and he's known for dreams... >:D Glad you're enjoying!!

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 18/08/07 10:15 PM · On: Fall Into Sleep

Terrific update Rae. How you can have three stories on the go at once is beyond me! Glad you got back to this one. Liked the last little conversation they had...oh, boys! *sniff*

Author's Response: Thanks! Three stories... I manage it by having extremely late updates, lol. :D So thanks for reading... I'm really glad you like them!

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