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Reviewer: copycat666 (Signed) · Date: 30/12/08 08:13 AM · On: Fear of the Dark

Love it ! I like short chapters they keep you focused

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 17/12/07 10:37 AM · On: Fear of the Dark

Love the pacing of this story so far...first time I read it, I was on the edge of my seat and now, reading it again, I can feel the same adrenaline buzz...sure sign of a great story!

Author's Response: Thank you! Again - means a lot coming from you. I always worry so I'm glad you like it so far!

Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 19/10/07 10:34 PM · On: Fear of the Dark

Love the chess analogy. Especially as we all know that Jared loves chess and is very good at it. I hope you let Dean make it to the other side of the board, just to make him even MORE dangerous and powerful.

Author's Response: I like chess. I'm really bad at it but I'm determined, so that counts for something right? I never knew Jared loves chess, that's really cool! As for Dean making it to the other side... hmmm... :D

Reviewer: bonnie (Signed) · Date: 30/09/07 11:43 PM · On: Fear of the Dark

So far so good keep it coming. Np pne story is perfect, but the way it is imaged you are to perfect to go wrong for i can see it happening.

Author's Response: Thanks loads - and I agree, stories can have their faults and moments that each reader cringes at so I hope you enjoy this one and don't have too many cringing moments.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 22/09/07 06:06 PM · On: Fear of the Dark

EEwww! He's going to toast with Dean's blood? Let's see him try.

Author's Response: Lol - it's written in a demon's contract somewhere about having the right to be as disgusting as you want... I had a copy around here somewhere... was just negotiating about the whole blood payment part of it... >:)

Reviewer: katie_kiss (Signed) · Date: 09/09/07 04:12 PM · On: Fear of the Dark

loving the story and i cant wait to read more

Author's Response: Thank you! :D

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 29/08/07 02:46 PM · On: Fear of the Dark

Ahhh, flashbacks. Gotta love 'em. Nice job with this, Rae! It's always fun to torture Sam and Dean...ahhh yes...soooo creepy too!

Author's Response: I'm pretty sure the flashbacks or flashforwards, lol, were something to do with laziness and being unable to write much for the past days besides - "they got up, did research and then slept." But glad you like 'em!!! I agree, fun to torture! *evil smile*

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 31/05/07 07:33 PM · On: Fear of the Dark

Sorry Rae, I went missing-in-action for a while there, but I'm back again now and determined to catch up! I like the chess analogy, it complements the idea of manipulation you have going. Well done!

Author's Response: Thank you loads! I'm such a geek and I love chess but I'm so rubbish at actually playing it, lol. By the way - Glad you're back!

Reviewer: fireball10 (Signed) · Date: 19/05/07 09:21 PM · On: Fear of the Dark

lovin it so far hurry with the next chapter can't what till yellow eyes gets his but kicked by Dean

Author's Response: Next chappie up! And thank you! I love it when Dean kicks butt so... :D

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 14/05/07 08:44 PM · On: Fear of the Dark

Captivating story so far. Loved the use of flashbacks. I'm looking forward for more, update soon.

Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you like it!

Reviewer: Evergreen (Signed) · Date: 14/05/07 10:14 AM · On: Fear of the Dark

Good job, Rae. I always enjoy your stories. I look forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you enjoy reading them 'cause I enjoy writing them. :D

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 14/05/07 08:23 AM · On: Fear of the Dark

Still enjoying, As always looking forward to an update - K

Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you like!

Reviewer: whitewave (Signed) · Date: 14/05/07 04:20 AM · On: Fear of the Dark

"He's got much more darkness in his heart" Yikes can't wait to find out what that means. Great job of moving between the two timelines too. Liked the demon's idea of the danger of pawns.

Author's Response: :D Thanks! I'm very wary when it comes to pawns... (I can't believe I called them prawns when I was younger *hangs head in shame*) ...I have three favourite pieces in chess, the Queen, the Knight and the pawn - of course I'm much better at playing checkers, lol.

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 13/05/07 09:54 PM · On: Fear of the Dark

Awesome chapter - you made it back to the beginning! Really looking forward to linking it all together. Loved the chess metaphor.

Author's Response:
Thanks! The beginning just came out... I wasn't planning on going back... or forward to there until later but... lol, it's weird how stories write themselves.
Yey! I love chess... I'm completely rubbish and have yet to win my Dad but I still love it.

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 13/05/07 08:54 PM · On: Fear of the Dark

just remember ...the only perfect science is 'hindsight' ........of course WE'RE all so perfect we NEVER make booboos....yeah right sure..... great story so far......

Author's Response: Yip, hindsight is a wonderful thing! Though I bet if I had the chance to do stuff again I'd still make the same mistakes, lol.

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 13/05/07 08:18 PM · On: Fear of the Dark

I loved it! I seriously cannot wait for an update! I will be coming on here everyday to check!
~Kayla

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks! :( Sorry I ain't been able to update just yet but I'm working on it :D I promise.

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